Write up of my first magazine mock up.

This is the first mock up of my magazine. The Magazine is Hip Hop and this is shown through the image and the strap lines as they include the names of famous hip hop/ rap artists. I picked the name "Revolution" because it connotes the idea of something new, different and unique , which is what hip hop is about. I think I could improve the mock up by including more on the front cover as there is a lot of empty space that would make the magazine look more interesting if it was taken up. I chose the colours as they are very contrasting so stand out to each other and also against the dark background.