This is my second mock up of the magazine front cover. I have improved this by using empty space up to make it look more full and exciting, I included a free gift which entices people to buy the magazine. this is because they feel they are getting something extra. I also realised that the magazine required something that explained properly what genre the magazine is so I made that clear with "THE TOP HIP HOP MAGAZINE" I think that this mock up is much better and clearer than the first.